Common Errors in Writing by Phil Bartle, PhD, Training Reference A few of the common errors in writing that hinder good communication Ain't: Some people believe that we should never use the word "ain't" in the English language. It is, however, a legitimate and valid word -- if it is used in the right place. It is a contraction for "am not." The sentence, "I ain't going to school today," is therefore correct, meaning, "I am not going to school today." It can be used only for the first person singular (I). It can not be used with "we," "they," "you," "thou," "he," "she," or any proper noun. Advice versus Advise: Advice is a noun, something that you give. It is a thing. Say, "Please give me some advice." Advise is a verb, something that you do. It is some action. Say, "Please advise me." Affect and Effect: As verbs, they differ. To affect some thing is to have some influence upon it. To effect some action is to cause it to happen. As nouns, they also differ. Affect is like affection, related to emotion. Effect is a result. Datum and Data: The word "data" is a plural noun, like "facts." Do not use it as a singular noun (like fact) or as a collective (like water). Right: "There are many data in that report." If you want the singular of data (one bit of information) then use the word, "datum." Right: "I need only one datum from that report." etc: End of thinking creatively (etc). Avoid using "etc." Fewer and Less: "Fewer" is used for counting while "less" is used for measuring. You can say Kwaku has fewer litres of fuel than Kwame, if litres are discrete things, or you can say Kwaku has less fuel than Kwame. You can say that Akua has fewer shillings than Efua, or you can say that Akua has less money than Efua. (You can not say that Efua has less shillings or that Kwaku has less litres). Forum and Fora: A forum is a place being used for communication within a group or collection of persons. Historically it was a physical gathering place, but metaphorically it could be in a newspaper or on the internet. More than one "forum" is not "forums." They are "fora." The word has a Latin origin so we do not make the plural by adding the letter "s." The word "fora" refers to several places for discussion. In general, "s" is not used to indicate plural for words that are borrowed from Latin. The singular (one) should end in "um" while the plural (more than one) should end in "a." Examples include: stadium, stadia; medium, media; datum; data. Hopefully: Do not use "hopefully" unless you state exactly who is doing the hoping. Say: "They stood hopefully in the rain waiting for the rock star to appear." Do not say: "Hopefully the bear will stay out of the village," or "Hopefully I will come in time." Say "We hope that the bear will stay out of the village," and "I hope that I will come in time." Generally, avoid all " fully" words if you do not specify who is doing the action. In Spite: There is no such word as "inspite." Make sure you use the two words separately, "in" and "spite." Isn't it: When you make a statement, then immediately ask if it is not true, you can use "isn't it" only if the question used the verb "to be" (ie "is" or one of its forms), the original question was positive, and if the subject of the sentence is third person singular (it). It is correct to say, for example, "It is coming, isn't it?" In many other languages, "isn't it" can be used without having to modify it to relate it to the original question. In English, you must make it consistent (with both the subject and the verb) -- and negative. Thus: "He is coming; isn't he?" "I am coming; ain't I?" "You are coming; aren't you?" "He ate the food: didn't he?" "You will bring the gift; won't you?" "You will not do that; will you?" Loose and Lose: The two words, "loose" and "lose," look similar, especially to those who speak English as a second language. It is easy to mix them up. The word, "loose," means something is not tight or securely fastened down. It might easily fall apart or fall off. The word "lose," in contrast, means to have something go away and become lost. Number of: Do not use the phrase "a number of" to indicate an unknown number of something. Instead, use the word "several." Passive Voice: The word "obfuscation" means to write or speak in such a way as to look as if you are saying something, but reveal very little. Using the passive voice is a common way to say less than people want to read or hear. In the passive voice you say, "The orange was eaten." That way you hide the subject and so do not reveal who ate the orange. If you use the active voice, you must reveal the subject. "Aziz ate the orange." The active voice is simpler, and it always identifies the subject, ie who did the action. Nothing is hidden. Always use the active voice in writing or speaking. Quotation Marks: English is not a logical language. We would think, if we are logical, that we should put a full stop, as the end of s a sentence, after the closing set of quotation marks., Not so. We first put the full stop (period) to end a sentence, then we put the closing quotation marks. The same with a comma. When we use quotation marks, the second set of marks are put after the comma, not before, as we might logically assume. Revert: To revert means to degenerate to an earlier condition. Say, "They reverted to barbarism." It does not mean to reply, as in "reply to a message." Say, "Please reply to this email message." Unique: The word "unique" means "one of a kind." There can only be one of that kind. This is an either/or situation; either something is unique or it is not. It can not be more or less. That means something can not be "very" unique or something can not be "more" unique than something else. It is like being pregnant; either you are or you are not; you can not be just a little bit pregnant, or less pregnant than Isabelle. --» «-- If you copy any part of this, please link it back to: http://www.scn.org/cmp/ Updated: 2003 May 3